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December 7, 2011
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:iconoceanscurse:
Made this for a school assignment :) Had to make a wine bottle. Complete with all materials and shaders etc.

Used 3Dsm 2010 and Vray 1.5

Also want to make this with mental ray, Tho I still have to figure out how to make such a nice glass material lol xD. Anyone got some good tutorial on that, please do share :)

:D.

Edit: Entire different render:D Wallpaper size :D
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:iconfunkycaveman:
Great composition and the label on the wine bottle adds that extra bit of authenticity. But from a more technical point of view, adding a UVW map on the wood table/floor and increase the tiling a bit would greatly enhance the effect of the 4 objects.
Also the stalks of the wine glasses could be made a bit thicker as they tend to be a bit lost, especially the one on the left. The glass on the left also seems to be floating a bit.
Try to experiment with:
-Caustics: More realistic
-More precise shadows
-Added wine to the glass
-Increasing detail in the scene such as drink mats and a bottle cork

Just to recap:
- Great authentic texturing on the bottle
- Realistic glass texture/refractions
- Nice reflections on the wine bottle

requested review from 3dStudioMaxUsers group.

keep up the good work and post it to the group!
-Glass
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Very ncie work, it gives off a very warm and inviting feeling; enhanced by the warm colour palette of the flooring and bottle.

Glass texture looks great; very realistic and believable : great specularity and HDR (I think) reflections.

Good points:

+Warm and inviting

+ Believable glass

+ Nicely framed / composed

+ A nicely produced piece of 3D work that is aesthetically pleasing, as well as being technically impressive.

Suggested Changes:

+ Thicken the stems for a more realistic shape

+ Do an ambient occlusion pass to give, the glasses especially, more of a presence in the world.

+ Flooring could be a little higher in resolution
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~Hansmar 1 day ago  Hobbyist General Artist
Very nice work!
I agree with the critiques: those glasses have very thin stems. I would not dare to use them. Few suggestions: a little more clear shadows would be nice, one of the glasses could have been broken and: I never succeed in such a sharp cut of the cover of the cork. Where has the cork gone, by the way?

Now that sounds like I have lots of things to comment. Not true, the majority of this work is great and I think the bottle is very good!
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=OceansCurse 19 hours ago  Student Digital Artist
Thanks for the feedback :) I haven't done any 3D work in quite a while. But it's fun to reflect on old work :).
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~Hansmar 10 hours ago  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure.
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:iconmogen1000:
f*ck that isnt real?
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:iconkenomica:
~Kenomica Jan 4, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Just checked out your coca-cola bottle and then this...looks like yo've made a big improvement here! (though I do like the coca-cola bottle).

Lighting is very nice, and the reflections look very natural and not overdone :)

I'd suggest maybe thickening the stem of the glasses, as they look extremely fragile and maybe adding some ambient occlusion to give them a little more presence.
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~Gery-Conriquez Dec 8, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
sehr gut^^
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=OceansCurse Dec 8, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Thanks :D
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